But do you think you could try to make the same rhythm?
example:
fnldkfndglkfdngklfdngkfdlhn red
nfgjldgkdnglfngkdfnhgfjlnkf dead
Jfhdfkldngkdlfgkbjfklnfgvfm scream
fcndsjklofndsgk,dsfndg,dfg dream
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What is your mood???
They are really nice fluffy, I appreciate this
But do you think you could try to make the same rhythm?
example: fnldkfndglkfdngklfdngkfdlhn red nfgjldgkdnglfngkdfnhgfjlnkf dead Jfhdfkldngkdlfgkbjfklnfgvfm scream fcndsjklofndsgk,dsfndg,dfg dream "Somewhere there's someone who dreams of your smile,
and finds in your presence that life is worth while. So when you are lonely, remember it's true Somebody somewhere is thinking of you."
thanks, it's just that the rest of the poem is in that rhythm, so it would be strange to suddenly change that. But I do really appreciate your wee verses, they're cute
 "Somewhere there's someone who dreams of your smile,
and finds in your presence that life is worth while. So when you are lonely, remember it's true Somebody somewhere is thinking of you."
The nights draw close, the air cools down as Autumn spreads it's damp around. Then Winter in it's frozen spell will hold us in it's chilly hell. But don't despair, as time rolls by there's one thing makes us cheer and sigh. Despite the long and darker nights Soon Christmas will be in our sights. fluffy 
no probs Nina...............i tend to change the rhythm in my poems from time to time..........sorry.......lol Fluffy
Thanks a lot fluffy
Okay, the poem is finished then! I'm going to write it down to you, so you can see. Autumn People think Autumn is sorrow in disguise That everything's dying, but please give it a try. Cause behind the clouds the sky is always blue So if you say Autumn is sad, then saddest are you. One year has past since the first leaf fell And you might think life between that has been like a burning hell. You no longer know those you thought you knew Because time is changing and you change too. Remember the sun will rise and welcome a new day, As the wind blows all the leaves away. You'll learn that darkness and sorrow aren't Autumn's all, If you let yourself be embraced by the beauty of Fall. The nights draw close, the air cool down As Autumn spreads it's damp around. Then Winter in it's frozen spell Will hold us in it's chilly hell. But don't despair, as time rolls by There's one thing that makes us cheer and sigh. Despite the long and darker nights Soon Christmas will be in our sights. The Winter draws near and the nights are late It's a season to love, a season to hate. A season to love, a season to hate. "Somewhere there's someone who dreams of your smile,
and finds in your presence that life is worth while. So when you are lonely, remember it's true Somebody somewhere is thinking of you."
That's okay Mia. Maybe another time
I must thank you again Laura and fluffy, it is really nice of you to come up with that sort of stuff. "Somewhere there's someone who dreams of your smile,
and finds in your presence that life is worth while. So when you are lonely, remember it's true Somebody somewhere is thinking of you."
you're welcome...it was fun getting the creative juices flowing again
Imagine.....
*chocolate is on it's way to Scotland from Norway*
Whatever it is, I hope you feel better soon. "Somewhere there's someone who dreams of your smile,
and finds in your presence that life is worth while. So when you are lonely, remember it's true Somebody somewhere is thinking of you."
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