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 by KC8t80 » Mon Oct 10, 2005 1:55 am
Here a fun thing to do for all u poets out there. try to come up with some haikus. It can be about anything. Jim, life, nature...what ever u want it to be about.
For those who don't know....A haiku is a 3 line poem normally about nature. Normally 3 syllables then 5 syllables then syllables. that is how it was originally done. But americans have adopted this form of poetry and turned it into just 3 line poem with no kind of rule to it. But thats the beauty of poetry, who can breaks the rules and create ur own.
Anyway i'll start with one:
Walking down the sidewalk
Shoelaces untied
I fall flat on my face
I'll try to come up some better ones later. that was only one i could think of.
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by Jimenem » Mon Oct 10, 2005 8:55 pm
Birds chirping in the trees
Flowers growing
God's artistic genius
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by fluffy » Mon Oct 10, 2005 9:07 pm
Leaves turning red,
carpet of gold.
Autumnal embrace......
fluffy  Fluffy
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by KC8t80 » Fri Oct 14, 2005 3:55 am
snow falls from the sky
kids dance and play
winter has come
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by Jimenem » Fri Oct 14, 2005 5:55 pm
Jumping into a pile of leaves
The sound of leaves crunching
The smell of Dog poop
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by lammy » Sat Oct 15, 2005 5:41 am
I really suck at this
but try
cause I know I suck
 Sorry had to do it-please don't get mad at me-   Bah hum bug!!!!
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by KC8t80 » Sun Oct 16, 2005 2:54 am
thats ok lammy....the best thing about any kind of poetry is that u can make or break the rules.
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by Realdini » Sun Oct 16, 2005 11:00 am
I think its going so well for this game...
"And thats the way the cookie crumbles"
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by KC8t80 » Mon Oct 17, 2005 3:38 am
a man of many faces
can change into anyone
he is Jim Carrey
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by Realdini » Mon Oct 17, 2005 8:17 am
Jim Carrey is the man,
the man how is fun
I wish i was his son
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by KC8t80 » Mon Oct 17, 2005 9:44 pm
nice one  I am part of an elite group of people......THE MEN OF JCO.
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by KC8t80 » Wed Oct 19, 2005 8:34 pm
Ace Ventura
man with cool hair
likes to speak from his bum.
 dang it that wasn't a real good one....but it was all i could think of for now. I am part of an elite group of people......THE MEN OF JCO.
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by Realdini » Wed Oct 19, 2005 8:39 pm
Bruce noland is the god of our world
he is the the best we have
and all the things we saw. "And thats the way the cookie crumbles"
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by nina » Thu Oct 20, 2005 7:03 am
Im sorry,but I dont understand this, is all you have to do to make three lines and thats it? cause I cant understannd why you say "this was not a good one" and stuff like that,how do you now when it is a good one,and when its not?! Im confused  "Somewhere there's someone who dreams of your smile,
and finds in your presence that life is worth while.
So when you are lonely, remember it's true
Somebody somewhere is thinking of you."
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by KC8t80 » Fri Oct 21, 2005 4:38 pm
its good if what you write makes sense and what i wrote (i felt) didn't make sense. I am part of an elite group of people......THE MEN OF JCO.
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